A good discussion on the use of colour - well done :) Maybe you could have expanded on this even more, by talking about the change in the lighting throughout the film...this is what the reviews should be like from now on - lots of analysis!
Make sure that your images are big enough for the reader to see what is going on - the centre ones in figure 3 are a bit lost, and it's very hard to see the detail in them. And just a very small picky thing - in the image list at the end, the medium should be in square brackets, so [Film still] for example.
Hi Lisa,
ReplyDeleteA good discussion on the use of colour - well done :) Maybe you could have expanded on this even more, by talking about the change in the lighting throughout the film...this is what the reviews should be like from now on - lots of analysis!
Make sure that your images are big enough for the reader to see what is going on - the centre ones in figure 3 are a bit lost, and it's very hard to see the detail in them.
And just a very small picky thing - in the image list at the end, the medium should be in square brackets, so [Film still] for example.