tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-276157653435820614.post8250368722932350408..comments2023-06-03T15:21:32.514+01:00Comments on Lisa Huntley UCA Rochester BA Hons Computer Animated Arts: MsLiksahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01418894224203909668noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-276157653435820614.post-5692074908765289602013-10-07T07:12:33.315+01:002013-10-07T07:12:33.315+01:00PS...don't forget to give the post a title too...PS...don't forget to give the post a title too!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-276157653435820614.post-6708710741837441272013-10-07T07:11:33.286+01:002013-10-07T07:11:33.286+01:00Hi Lisa,
Well done on getting your first review ou...Hi Lisa,<br />Well done on getting your first review out there! <br /><br />Just a quick reminder of what the brief is asking you to do - <br /><br />'In addition to and in support of your own critique, your reviews must include a minimum of 3 quotations from 3 different published sources + poster art + supporting stills.<br />Please note - Harvard Method must be used for all quotations and all illustrations to be referenced correctly. Reviews are to include bibliography and illustration list.'<br /><br />You have included images to support your discussion, so well done there. You should make sure however, that you introduce them and refer to them in your discussion; so for example, when you are talking about the strange sea-creatures, you could say something like, 'as shown in figure 4'. The same goes for quotes; you should make sure that they are 'meaty' enough to support your discussion, and make sure that you 'unpick' them rather than just have them plonked in. <br />There is a very specific way of referencing both quotes and images, so have a look at myUCA, in the myLibrary section, or here -<br />http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/article/27187/Referencing<br /><br />My final comment refers to the way you address the filmmaker - when you first mention him, you are right to use his full name; after that however, you should just use his surname, so Méliès instead of Georges. Calling him by his first name sounds a bit over-friendly! :)<br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com